Comments for C. Dominique Gibson

Comment on Untied: One Reason Mother’s Know Best by taraisarockstar

taraisarockstar — Sat, 18 Feb 2012 03:04:21 +0000

I love the line in your poem “my labored heart.” Very powerful!

Comment on Untied: One Reason Mother’s Know Best by ladynimue

ladynimue — Fri, 10 Feb 2012 17:16:32 +0000

soooper sweet …

Comment on My Neighbor My Hero: The Untold Story of a True Patriot by CDominique Gibson

CDominique Gibson — Wed, 08 Feb 2012 00:14:02 +0000

I am too, that could have gone on all night!

Comment on My Neighbor My Hero: The Untold Story of a True Patriot by taraisarockstar

taraisarockstar — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 17:05:01 +0000

I had a neighbor that would scream at the crack of dawn out to someone and beep until they got into the car. It was a regular occurrence. It took so much effort to hold back from asking why he couldn’t knock on the door and ask them to come down instead of waking up the entire neighborhood! lol Glad your neighbor was able to help in your situation.

Comment on This B is Just Plain Evil!!! by CDominique Gibson

CDominique Gibson — Tue, 24 Jan 2012 02:11:28 +0000

You should! Great observations!

Comment on This B is Just Plain Evil!!! by Warren C. Bennett

Warren C. Bennett — Mon, 23 Jan 2012 20:57:05 +0000

It could also be taken less literally – A person could take the idea of a pen and craft something else around it. Like a robot that was made for good but ended up doing evil. Everytime the main character uses said robot, something bad happens. The main character could work on fixing the robot, spending hours trying to figure out what is going on. Eventually the robot is fix, but only because the main character has giving it his (or her) humanity.

Hmm. Maybe I’ll write that XD

Comment on This B is Just Plain Evil!!! by CDominique Gibson

CDominique Gibson — Mon, 23 Jan 2012 16:55:11 +0000

Well, this kind of story would most likely be a comedy. In a sense, that pen truly was my antagonist because it kept getting in the way of my “ritual” of doing my homework. In a story, I would imagine the pen would torment me, like no matter how many times I through it away, it would just come back and not work. It would be the pen that’s in my bag when a cute guy gives me his number, and memory for those sorts of things suck sometimes.

It would be the pen in my school bag during a really important exam and no one else would have a spare, that sort of thing. I could go on for ages really and I do think that it’s sort of funny but dark too. The one problem you can’t get rid of coming back again, Like Poe’s the Tell Tale Heart. He killed the man, he thought, but the heart wouldn’t stop beating (though it was his own heart) but you get what I mean, right?

Comment on This B is Just Plain Evil!!! by Warren C. Bennett

Warren C. Bennett — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 22:47:35 +0000

1) You are way more organized than I am. I mean seriously more organized. 2) For me (and maybe this is because I’m a man) If it were just a set of general store bought pens and not a fancy pen, I’d of just threw the one that didn’t work a way and went on to the others. Of course it has been at least 6 years since I’ve written anything out in long hand for any length of time…

Okay – how would you turn the pen incident in to an antagonist for your story?

Comment on This B is Just Plain Evil!!! by CDominique Gibson

CDominique Gibson — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 19:25:38 +0000

They are relatively inexpensive too. Thanks for letting me know how long they run for. I wouldn’t know because people keep stealing them.

Comment on This B is Just Plain Evil!!! by BrainRants

BrainRants — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 19:14:37 +0000

Bic pens are temperamental, yes. However, once you find a workhorse, they go for a good, long time.